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Original: 1/27/2004 10:28 PM
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Tuesday, January 27, 2004

 

When I was little a girl in my class had an asthma attack.  This terrified me because I couldn't see these Asthmas... but sure enough they were assaulting her right before my eyes.  The teacher took the Asthmas' victim to the nurse and I turned inward and imagined the nasty little brown spores with teeth and red eyes that flew down from the sky unannounced and attacked unsuspecting grade schoolers. 

When I was a little older we saw a plume of smoke in the sky.  Fire was such a distant concept to a group of nine year olds who lived in the suburbs.  We sent Dan, who was the oldest amongst us, to go and investigate.  His ten and a half years afforded him with an allowed distance farther than the the rest of us.  Away he peddled on his bike.  He returned some time later, the minutes are very abstract to me now,  and said that he got as far as Walt's Ice Cream.  "Walt's!" we all exclaimed impressed, that was almost nine blocks away... much farther than any of us had ever gone.  "Somebody at Walt's told me that the ice skating rink had burned down."  Generally my friends and I were relieved, we weren't big fans of ice skating. 

When I was six years old I rode the bus to my first day of school.  All the way across the river to Eisenhower Elementary.  It was a humid September day and very cloudy.  I don't remember what happened in school that day.  I think my teachers name might have been Mrs. Parks.  When I got home the sky was dark.  Off I went to a friends birthday party.  We were in the back yard playing with water guns under a strange sky.  All I remember is pink.  An adult told us to come inside.  In the basement the party continued, we were playing double dragon two when the lights went out.  The lights didn't come back on and an hour or so later my mother told me it was time to go.  A Tornado hit?  In Plainfield?  Oh.  Locations of cities were so inconsequential when you were little.  My mom had to go into the hospital and work all night.  My dad and sister and I slept in the living room with a flash light because the lights still hadn't come on.  At day light the next day my best friend Greg and I set out to play like we always did.  We were perplexed to find lots and lots of wet pink fluff strewn about every where, pink fluff of the sort you find in your unfinished basement...  Duly noted, children went about their lives. 

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Wow, I'm going to come back more often if you write shit like this.. Excellent stuff.
Posted 1/27/2004 11:17 PM by red_dirt_girl - reply

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oh yeah... POOOOOONNNNNN
Posted 1/27/2004 11:18 PM by red_dirt_girl - reply

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no yea, that was an amazing post.  nostalgia, thanks...

-David

Posted 1/28/2004 12:22 AM by AsylumAddict - reply

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Wow, that was a great post...
Posted 1/28/2004 12:30 AM by Forsberg21 - reply

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i agree with them.   ^
Posted 1/28/2004 1:01 AM by Blinker_the_Star - reply

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Interesting.
Posted 1/28/2004 8:26 AM by bittersweetjaded Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Ah! Very good!
Posted 1/28/2004 9:04 AM by mezamashii Xanga True Member Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Maybe my eyes are getting bad.  I thought the first sentence read, "when I was a little girl..."
Posted 1/28/2004 11:37 PM by idiom Xanga Lifetime Member - reply

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Very nice entry. Not sure I remember post of this kind around her, but then you did explain that...
Posted 1/30/2004 8:01 AM by verona - reply

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nice work.

Posted 1/30/2004 2:35 PM by MoonlightMile - reply

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This piece was featured in this week's ZZ!

Congratulations and keep up the good work!

Posted 2/21/2004 2:17 AM by ZangaZine - reply

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This is excellent.  It's hard to remember sometimes, even if you're a parent, how it is to see with the child's eye. 
Posted 2/27/2004 12:18 PM by lovingmy40s Xanga Premium Member - reply

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That was great!  You are very descriptive with your writing.... 

-dropping in from ZangaZine

Donna

Posted 2/27/2004 10:45 PM by DonnaJ71 - reply


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